@raxs1983 - The term "TIER1 HOLDER" is too wide. We should stick to "Tier1(General) migrant" I think. Otherwise we will be representing other catergories that are not affected. Also, when you have merged the different versions, there is duplication. For example - in the first paragraph itself the ...

@LennyTzang - the first change you have suggested is already covered (in the sentence right next to it). And quoting references to our positive contributions when we are addressing the home secretary is not necessary in my opinion. She has plenty of staff to verify our claim. Also, such a list could ...

I am not a Guru in English. But, I have slightly re-worked the draft from language perspective - made a few things a bit subtle. I have also taken a little liberty to remove a few things that I felt which could back fire on us. For example: if we say that other countries welcome us, UK could say "Go ...