Could moderators please check work experience letter?

Dear Moderators and senior members,

Is it possible to check my draft graduate work experience letter below is appropriate and meet the requirements of the HSMP guide and is it convincing to be a "graduate level work experience"?
Please give your comments and advice on what needs to be added and improved on and what needs to be excluded? Thank you very much and look forward to getting some feedback to the above.

Greatly appreciated,
YYY


XX XXX 2006


HSMP Caseworker
Highly Skilled Migrant Programme (HSMP)
PO Box 551
Home Office
Doncaster
South Yorkshire
DN1 1XU


Dear Sir/ Madam,


RE: GRADUATE LEVEL WORK EXPERIENCE REFERENCE LETTER FOR YYY

This letter is to certify YYY was employed by AAA as a full time graduate starting from XXX to XXX. The graduate position requires a minimum degree level qualification (Bachelor of XXX), which YYY holds.

During YYY's time with AAA as a graduate, YYY worked on a wide range of projects carrying out numerous duties and responsibilities. These duties and responsibilities, under the supervision of project managers and senior staff, like myself, are described and listed as follow:

• Conducted project site visits and collected site information (via photographs and site measures) to be used as reference information for development of design ideas and writing of reports.
• Collated and analysed site information to prepare and present feasibility reports for the client and project stakeholders
• Contributed to preliminary design and development of architectural ideas of projects
• Contributed to spatial planning and interior planning of architectural projects
• Explored and provided several design and planning options/proposals for project architect’s and client’s approval
• Identified and solved architectural problems (eg. planning configurations, spacing, construction details)
• Made responsible decisions on tasks and matters assigned
• Transferred freehand sketches and plans into computer drawings using Autocad (a form of Computer Aided Design software)
• Attended regular meetings with the client, project stakeholders and consultants (eg surveyors, engineers) to discuss about project issues
• Assisted project architects and project team members in documenting, construction detailing, and drafting architectural documents using Autocad
• Assisted project architect in updating and amending architectural documents and drawings
• Co-ordinated consultant (eg engineers) documents with architectural documents
• Co-ordinated own work with other project team members
• Contributed in delivering architectural documents and drawings for tender issue to builder(s) for pricing
• Researched, sourced and selected building finishes and materials
• Liaised and discussed with building product suppliers for colour options, product options and quotes
• Prepared and presented selected finishes and materials on a finish board for client’s approval


If you have any queries to the above or require further clarification and information, please do not hesitate to contact me.


Yours faithfully,






NAME
Partner

Date