If I were you I would create a CV via a website such as
www.monster.co.uk, in which you will have to fill in a pre-configured questionnaire. This will produce a CV in the correct format.
As to the English, Phil is absolutely right. I would also bin poorly written CV's, and I guess that most employers in the UK would. When you have your CV in the correct format, get someone you know that has a good command of written English to correct it.
Another tip, limit yourself to 1 or 2 pages max, but
www.monster.co.uk will give you a lot of tips on CV writing (which is an art, by the way, and should not be taken lightly).