First draft for letter in support of spouse visa

Hi all,

Can someone review this and please tell me what I am missing and what else I can add to be more convincing.

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Letter of Support for Application’s spouse visa application
Sponsor’s name:
To whom it may concern,
My wife and I had an arranged marriage. We were introduced to each other in November 2018. We have been in communication for the past year through whatsapp calls and chat. After 2 months of chatting, I decided to travel to Indonesia to see her and her family for a couple of days. Her family paid for our hotel stay while we were there. We both really liked each other because and we both decided we would get married to each other. Before I went to Indonesia, I bought her a harry potter brush set for her. It was something silly but I knew she would have loved.
She then came down to UK to visit me and my family when we got engaged to each other. I sponsored for her and her family’s hotel stay throughout most of the holiday. While she was here, she saw life in the UK and how it was for me on a day to day basis. I returned back to Indonesia in the month of September to get my affidavit from the UK embassy. While I was there, her paid for my hotel stay and food expenses. Before my second trip to Indonesia, I bought her an idiot-phone 11 as a graduation present. I know it’s something she wanted. She was so happy when she received it.
After the wedding, we had the opportunity to go to Hong Kong for a week and spend some time together. While we were there, I took care of all her spending her hotels, flights, food etc. We were so glad we did that trip. We got so much closer together, really grew as a couple and we really understood each other. It made us both so happy. We both know we will be very happy together. We can’t wait to spend the rest of our life together.

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