psw letter reads as following: ok or not? Views please

[langet so pilon]

Tier 4 sponsor number :xxxxx
Tuesday xxx
Dear sir/madam

Student name: xxxx
Date of birth: xxxx
Current course of study: xxxx
Awarding body:xxxx
Course commencement: xxxxx
Course completion: xxxxx


Uk Address:
xxxx
xxxx



I write to confirm that the above-named student was enrolled as a full time student at this college for period detailed above. Class attendance exceeded twenty-one hours per week in addition to self directed private study. This course was taught in english.


The candidate has successfully completed the above course and was awarded a Master of xxxx on 17th March 2011. The college has not received Mr xxxxx certificate once we receive this we will forward the certificate to him.

The awarding body is xxxx. XXXX college is a recognised institution within the UK.

ANYTHING MISSING ?????

[geriatrix]

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