Please help me to correct my SOP letter after refusal
My Father is on Family visit (His sister there ) And i want to go UK as a general visitor ,(i don't want to hide anything from ECO that's why my Letter is crossing 3 pages. tomorrow i have appointment kindly correct my attached SOP and that will be highly appreciated
And In Family name i'm writing = NA* i don't have any family name , only given name Khush singh
Regards
khush singh
To
Visa Officer,
British High Commission,
Abu Dhabi / Bahrain.
thanks in advance Sub:- Regarding My visa application for General visitor at United Kingdom
Sir/Madam,
This is to request you that my name is Khush Singh and my passport number is K*****. I previously applied for a General visitor visa for United Kingdom Post Ref: Abu Dhabi\1130388
. But my visa got reused because Entry Clearance Officer (eco) was not satisfied with few things in my case. Now my father and relatives from United Kingdom (U.K.) suggested me to re-apply my case to satisfy the entry clearance officer on the refusal grounds by giving proper Explanations. • Sir/Madam please note that I am a very genuine visitor and I applied my visa to visit UK for few days only but eco refused me because of the following reasons
1. According to Eco I am employed as a quality inspector with Al Hussam international Mechanical Contracting since 17/05/2007 but I have not provided an accurate account of my employment circumstances.
In providing clarification to same is objection this time I am submitting letter from ALHUSSAM International Mechanical contracting S.P.C & Visa Translations, which clearly states and proves that I am employed with the same company since 18/May/2007. And my designation is Quality Inspector under welding department. If you still feel any doubts regarding same point enquiries can be made anytime from my employer as well.
2. According to eco in support of my visa application I have submitted a letter of State bank of India Bahrain, itemized bank statements for a joint account showing account balance on 08/12/13 to be BHD 8,191.587 and letter from your father confirming he has no objection for you. to utilize funds in the account , there is no evidence confirming the source of the cash deposits of BHD 1,600 on 01/12/2013 BHD 700 on 12/11/2013 and BHD 1,000 on 04/07/2013 , eco is not satisfied the funds in this account will be available to finance my visit
Sir/Madam please note now I am trying to clarify all details regarding above given refusals with proper documentation in details. I hope it will be very helpful to you to access my visa application.
Clarification regarding deposit of BHD 1,600 on 01/12/2013
Sir/Madam if you see my bank statements carefully you will find that I withdrawn BHD 1,600 on 27/11/2013 from my bank and I deposited same amount BHD 1,600 on 01/12/2013. Reason behind these transactions is only I helped one of my close friend (Ex- Colleague) to support him financially to pay his two month rent in advance for a Three-storey building for rent and when he returned me same amount of money is deposited to same bank. If you still feel any doubts regarding same point enquiries can be made anytime from my friend +973-3656-505 Abdul Hameed .
Clarification regarding deposit of BHD 700 on 12/11/2013 & BHD 1,000 on 04/07/2013
For the transactions of these deposits I am submitting documents which clearly show that I have taken my annual leave salary, Balance leave salary and deposited same amount in my bank. Please check my all docs carefully, where you will find cash voucher of BHD 700 & 1000. Letter regarding requisition to pay my annual leave salaries are also attached with my case.
Sir/Madam now I mostly cleared my reasons of refusals and if you still feel any doubts regarding my visa application you are more than welcome to contact me or my employer any time. One more thing I would like to clear ‘while in the United Kingdom as a General Visitor I am not going to stay with my relatives. As a General Visitor i want to spend some quality time to visit tourist places; Beautiful sights especially the museums and architectures with my father. I also want to experience the food, culture and meeting new people . During the trip all the expenses including Travel, Food and Hotel Accommodation would be borne by me.
Thanking you.
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To,
Visa Officer,
British High Commission,
Abu Dhabi /Bahrain.
Sub: Khush Singh, Indian Passport No. K****, General Visitor Visa for United Kingdom
Dear Sir/Madam:
I would like to submit my General Visitor visa application for United Kingdom. The reason why I am applying for United Kingdom Visa for 2 weeks, my father is on family visit in the United kingdom on her sister’s Invitation (Mrs. Hardev Kaur Powar w/o Sarwan Powar), My father’s London to India travel itinerary is on Sunday 23rd February -2014 that’s why I would like to visit the UK and Take my father for couple of days to spend some quality father & son time to visit tourist places; Beautiful sights especially the museums and architectures with my father. I also want to experience the food, culture and meeting new people.
I am employed at Al Hussam International Mechanical Contracting SPC, Seef District Kingdom of Bahrain since May 2007 and currently holding the position of Quality Inspector. Vacation from work has already been approved for the whole duration of this trip.
I intend to leave the Kingdom of Bahrain on February 14th 2014 and return to Kingdom of Bahrain on 24th February 2014. I will be paying for my trip to the UK and will be responsible for my accommodation at Boston Manor Hotel (attached) and living expenses. I have reserved my flight with KLM Royal Dutch Stupid Booking Ref: 295H8H . I have travel Insurance policy from AXA Insurance covering my trip in UK for any kind of medical emergency cover upto 1,000,000 $ .
Please find the following documents to support my visa application enclosed herewith:
* Application form, duly dated and signed with passport-size picture
* SOP Letter
* NOC from Joint account holder
* Letter from Employer with completer History showing the date I’m expected to return for work
* Pay slips, Credit card statements, Bank Certificate & Statement of Bank Account
* Plane ticket booking reservation via KLM.
* Hotel booking reservation.
* Travel Insurance with benefits coverage of 1,000,000$.
I hope I have provided sufficient information for your consideration I trust that you will find that everything is in order. For questions and clarifications, please feel free to contact me anytime.
Sincerely,
singh